
Why would some random stranger be talking about Scaleaha?
Not to mention in my cave!
In the kids cave.
I turn and begin to run away from the cave but then I remember my Maskas favorite saying.
'Follow your dreams, but more importantly take risks!'
I stop dead in my tracks; a single tear rolling gently down my cheek.
I turn back.
"For you Maska!" I say and run back towards the cave.
Instead of entering slowly and timidly I barge in, full speed as though I'm a raging bull fighting in the arena.
'Quiet feet better than loud feet on a battle field. Surprises the enemy.'
This time words of advice from my father.
Not to mention in my cave!
In the kids cave.
I turn and begin to run away from the cave but then I remember my Maskas favorite saying.
'Follow your dreams, but more importantly take risks!'
I stop dead in my tracks; a single tear rolling gently down my cheek.
I turn back.
"For you Maska!" I say and run back towards the cave.
Instead of entering slowly and timidly I barge in, full speed as though I'm a raging bull fighting in the arena.
'Quiet feet better than loud feet on a battle field. Surprises the enemy.'
This time words of advice from my father.
He past away when I was seven years old.
He died from an awful illness.
He was a herbalist.
Every summer he would leave the house and enter this very forest.
Every autumn; just as winter was about to brake he would return; every year, except this one. We received a letter by pigeon post around January the 18th.
It was a note from one of his companions explaining that he was very ill, definitely not strong enough to continue the expedition, or return home for that matter.
Another month on we received a second letter, this time brought personally to our household explaining his death.
More of the quiet type, keeping to himself most of the time.
My brother Kanyanta also disappeared around this time, never to be seen again.
My house had been split in two.
The boys looked after by the gods, and my Maska and me left alone at home in our large house causing us to move home and me to end my education.
I think of him now as I enter the cave.
My rage reduced to a calm.
I think about how strange his sudden illness was.
I sometimes wonder whether the story was true.
Maybe he was murdered, or maybe he had run of never too be seen again.
I slip down another corner.
The voices louder now.
My walk turns to a run, my run to a sprint, my sprint to the ground.
I land hard on my back the whole ground vibrating.
The cave goes quiet; the voices stop.
I here footsteps hurrying down the tunnel.
I see faces looking down on me.
I rub my eyes.
Surely my eyes are lying?
No they can't be.
Above me stands my father, my brother and Malanao.
Does anyone other than Ms Candy every read this?
If no-one does I'll stop. I'm Writing this for you guys yet I get no feedback and when I do its from one person. I apologize to the people who do comment and do read this, but I am honestly considering stopping.....
Though I may keep going for my own entertainment....
Photo reference: Google Images-web.mit.edu/povray_v3.6.1/samples/teardrop.png
P.S I'm not going to post Scaleaha this weekend...depending on how many comments I get, I will continue posting as usual on Monday.
Thanks and sorry if you really wanted chapter seven and eight.

6 kommentarer:
IM A ROOM5IAN sagde...
i do!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how could i not?!? it is such a great story, please keep posting!
22. marts 2007 22:48
Miss Candy sagde...
A sec ago when i was here i thought ya posted thisall ready,it's still great:glad im 1 of the 1st to read it!!
22. marts 2007 22:51
Miss Candy sagde...
Please coment
22. marts 2007 22:51
Kitty Kat sagde...
Oh thanks guys!
Imaroom5ian.....do you read this! I never new! Ms Candy I know you always read this and I'm always happy to read your comments! Remember always comment to show where you've been......room5ian i can't post it twice a day because I spend an hour every day doing one chapter. i'm bored stiff by the end of it!
22. marts 2007 23:59
Skipper Bob sagde...
hey this is scary she murders someone there alive someones dead their alive and shes left home
23. marts 2007 00:27
Kitty Kat sagde...
no its not honestly it will all become clear....soon...
23. marts 2007 02:08
primprim sagde...
i love the story build-up and the use of quirky words!
it is very creative.
i'm running out of things to say.
overall, it is marvellous!
pim:P
23. marts 2007 13:40
primprim sagde...
P.S.
don't stop!
writing stories is a great way to express yourself.
I have the same problem too. I have to wait for feedback on my two latest posts and it has already been a few days.
23. marts 2007 13:43
Kitty Kat sagde...
THANKYOU SO MACH GUYS!!!!!!
I REALLY appreciate all your guys support!
Four is definitly enough for me to keep writing Scaleaha; actually make it five; not only di I write for you guys but I write for my own joy and entertainment.
But without comments it fells really un-porpose-ful.
Thanks again guys...
If I were the teacher I would give you all millions of certificates!
23. marts 2007 14:18
Miss Candy sagde...
Kitty kat don't stop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I reckon we should give you a certifacate for-thiry-year old writing skill your story is greta and please write 2 day or maybe even 5 if i'm lucky!!
Don't forget to comment
23. marts 2007 16:55
Miss Candy sagde...
Sorry i ment great not greta and i meant 2 a day bye and don't forget to comment.
23. marts 2007 16:57
Kitty Kat sagde...
what do you mean
23. marts 2007 19:30
Miss Candy sagde...
Look carefully on the other comment:No one's been on my blog for at least 2 days in a row.....
24. marts 2007 00:55
Miss Candy sagde...
Dette indlæg er blevet fjernet af en blog-administrator.
24. marts 2007 12:15
IM A ROOM5IAN sagde...
um who ever did that lng space can you not do that please it is realy annoying....thanks!
24. marts 2007 14:20
Miss Candy sagde...
Dette indlæg er blevet fjernet af en blog-administrator.
24. marts 2007 21:03
Miss Candy sagde...
Hello check out nasty hair-cut please read it(you have to look for it as it is an edited post!!)
24. marts 2007 21:38
primprim sagde...
-Ms candy
I agree with LE!
it is kinda annoying, when you did that to my blog i deleted the comment. It really isn't that amusing
tip: when someone says that you are being a little bit annoying, stop! thats what i do anyway...
24. marts 2007 23:36
Kitty Kat sagde...
Yes Ms Candy...I'm deleting those comments.
Just to clarify, if you ask me thats spamming! Putting a huge space with barely any writing really annoy's me. This is for writing comments relevent for to the story not huge spaces with three sentences.
Also I can't write this weekend. I had a friend over last night and I don't feel to well tonight.
Also sorry guys I can't do two chapters a night. I can scarcly manage one.
P.S Sorry about my spelling. I don't feel too good...
24. marts 2007 23:47
Miss Candy sagde...
will you be at scwl 2morow and as gwe le comkmented on your blog i can't remember!!
25. marts 2007 00:07
Ezylryb sagde...
thats a great story. it gets better and better!!!! im going to read the next chapter, if there is 1. i could read it over and over!
c u later.
26. marts 2007 23:01
Miss Candy sagde...
Hello
27. marts 2007 11:42
wow. that comment is really long... what is it for?
by the way, I already read this chapter on your ordinary blog and it was really good. im supposing that it is exactly the same story?
pim:P
yeah it is...the long comment was is there because i deleted the post from my other blog. you have to have the comments that people put for a school reference so yeah...
oh okay! i get it now. cool story anyway.
pim:P
Suggestion: Don't use so many colours. It does look cool, but it's harder to read. Good writing though
Yeah I do agree....you see I wrote this a long time ago before i knew that.
pbznn
Kitty Kat
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