Cold fingers grasp my neck pulling me back away from my destiny.
"No!" I cry, yanking them away.
Drowning out the shouts of people near me.
"Stop!" I call but my words fade into the distance.
Rain bounces of the ground along with my tears, no difference between the two....not anymore at least.
My clothes stick to my body, frail from the sorrow of the sad day not yet over, reviving my body with a fresh blast of sadness.
"Why me!" I call to no-one in particular.
Why did I have to be the guarder of the stone!
Why couldn't someone else do the job!
The stone had given me a purpose for my life for my heart and sole to have a job to for fill.
Why hadn't I run after Malanao when he had taken the stone?
Fear.
The cause of all evil.
"Why!" I call again.
Someone drops an umbrella at my feet.
Not a budget cheep umbrella that you buy from a department store but a real expensive one probably handmade for this person.
I look up.
Oh the confusion of it all why me!!!!!!!
"Why me!!!!" I call, yet again.
I throw the umbrella in the gutter and chase after my destiny.
The stone, and Malanao.
This is the first chapter of my new novel "Schaleaha".
I will hopefully be writing a chapter a day as the story slowly unravels. Please only relevant comments and yes this was WRITTEN BY ME and it is COPYRIGHT
1 kommentar:
Miss Candy sagde...
Hello kittykat who are so good, and in year5 i thought melanie was good, forget about her!!! please comment Im first to comment again!! By the way my bro ripped ya phone no. so give it to me sometime bye. Oh by the way my grandma woke me up at 6:00 as she still thought it was 7:30!!! I wish we got used to daylight savings before!!!
18. marts 2007 12:05
primprim sagde...
wow, very touching.
I LOVE IT!!!!!
pim:P
18. marts 2007 12:26
Kitty Kat sagde...
Poor you Ms Candy!!!!
Thankyou for the compliments.
Come backon my blog before you go to bed tommorrow and you should hopefully see the next chapter...
18. marts 2007 12:54
Miss Candy sagde...
OH kit de kat kitty kat aKte Comment your winning!!!! seeeeya
I decided im noveling up too!!
18. marts 2007 22:13
IM A ROOM5IAN sagde...
wow its very deep, i love it. your a great poet
19. marts 2007 22:12
Mr Woody sagde...
what a wonderful writers guild you are creating girls.
sorry kitty kat - i read chapter three first so forgive my comments if they are confusing.
great work! well done!
there could be an excellence award in this for you...
nice use of punctuation, by the way.
19. marts 2007 22:59
Kitty Kat sagde...
Thanks everyone!
20. marts 2007 00:15
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