My mind spins.
I feel myself get weaker and weaker finally making the connection.
"Holiya?" I hear Sheeka say.
"Are you okay?"
"Fine," I say, snapping back to earth.
Malanao grins. I can see he recognizes me but he gives no indication of this to his sister.
"This is Holiya," Sheeka tells him.
"Nice to meet you," he lie's.
"Sleana Savale!" I reply.
He nods.
"Can you leave my room now Malanao?" Sheeka asks him.
"Fine then!" he says reaching for Scaleaha.
Suddenly I snatch my Scaleaha off the bed and sprint out of the room.
Down the hallway, into the kitchen, up the ladder, onto the roof, down the wall, along the ally,down the road, around the corner, where next?
I stop in my tracks.
I wish I had paid more attention as I had run here.
I'm lost in a completely different part of the city than I'm used to in the pouring rain with a mad man and his sister chasing me all over a stupid stone.
I take a deep breath then run right.
Left, right,left making the route up as I go.
Surely they've lost my track now!
I should stop, and walk, but I can't stop.
They would find me.
I'm sure.
I turn yet another corner.
Then suddenly I see it.
Ravana Prima.
My old primary school.
I finally know where I am!
I follow my old route back to my small clay house.
"Vedi Maska!!!" I call to my Mum.
"Vedi!" She calls back.
I go into the bathroom and hang Scaleaha on the door handle.
I light a fire in the bath pit then carry buckets of water over to the bath and poor them in.
My bath slowly heats.
When its a nice lukewarm temperature I climb in.
I let my body relax and the baddness of the day slip away from me.
"Holiya!" I here my Maska call.
I lift me head out of the bath.
"Yeah!" I call back.
"Do you homework!"
I slip my head back into the bath the fumble for the plug.
I find the chain then pull.
The water rushes out of my bath and onto the fire putting it out.
I rap a crisp towel around my body and grab a hot cocoa of the beanch.
I pull the Scaleaha pouch of the door handle and open the pouch.
I slip my hand inside.
The pouch is empty.
Scaleaha has gone.
Here is a list of the words and there meanings.
-Sleana Savale!-A common Sxwalloin term meaning soft as silk. It is a respectful way to say thankyou to someone older than you.
Vedi Maska-Hi mum
Vedi-Hi
Once again this is my own writting and it is COPYWRIGHT!
Happy Commenting.
Photo Referance-Google Images-www4.nau.edu/.../Stone/12%20dc%20stone.JPG
I feel myself get weaker and weaker finally making the connection.
"Holiya?" I hear Sheeka say.
"Are you okay?"
"Fine," I say, snapping back to earth.
Malanao grins. I can see he recognizes me but he gives no indication of this to his sister.
"This is Holiya," Sheeka tells him.
"Nice to meet you," he lie's.
"Sleana Savale!" I reply.
He nods.
"Can you leave my room now Malanao?" Sheeka asks him.
"Fine then!" he says reaching for Scaleaha.
Suddenly I snatch my Scaleaha off the bed and sprint out of the room.
Down the hallway, into the kitchen, up the ladder, onto the roof, down the wall, along the ally,down the road, around the corner, where next?
I stop in my tracks.
I wish I had paid more attention as I had run here.
I'm lost in a completely different part of the city than I'm used to in the pouring rain with a mad man and his sister chasing me all over a stupid stone.
I take a deep breath then run right.
Left, right,left making the route up as I go.
Surely they've lost my track now!
I should stop, and walk, but I can't stop.
They would find me.
I'm sure.
I turn yet another corner.
Then suddenly I see it.
Ravana Prima.
My old primary school.
I finally know where I am!
I follow my old route back to my small clay house.
"Vedi Maska!!!" I call to my Mum.
"Vedi!" She calls back.
I go into the bathroom and hang Scaleaha on the door handle.
I light a fire in the bath pit then carry buckets of water over to the bath and poor them in.
My bath slowly heats.
When its a nice lukewarm temperature I climb in.
I let my body relax and the baddness of the day slip away from me.
"Holiya!" I here my Maska call.
I lift me head out of the bath.
"Yeah!" I call back.
"Do you homework!"
I slip my head back into the bath the fumble for the plug.
I find the chain then pull.
The water rushes out of my bath and onto the fire putting it out.
I rap a crisp towel around my body and grab a hot cocoa of the beanch.
I pull the Scaleaha pouch of the door handle and open the pouch.
I slip my hand inside.
The pouch is empty.
Scaleaha has gone.
Here is a list of the words and there meanings.
-Sleana Savale!-A common Sxwalloin term meaning soft as silk. It is a respectful way to say thankyou to someone older than you.
Vedi Maska-Hi mum
Vedi-Hi
Once again this is my own writting and it is COPYWRIGHT!
Happy Commenting.
Photo Referance-Google Images-www4.nau.edu/.../Stone/12%20dc%20stone.JPG
1 kommentar:
IM A ROOM5IAN sagde...
im definately hooked now!! what is scaleaha and why is it so special to her? why is her friends brother taking it away from her? told you i like it!!!!
19. marts 2007 22:19
Mr Woody sagde...
greta writing ktikatyk - i am left wondering which language it is you are using and wear the setting is - India perhaps? whata grand idea to write within a different setting and cultural perspective - it must be challenging - have you travelled abroad?
as you re-read your work are you tempted to go back to edit small spelling errors or typos?
thank you for allowing your work to be critiqued in class. that is a wonderful gift from you to us.
8>)
19. marts 2007 22:55
Miss Candy sagde...
HOLLY!! AGAIN DON'T FORGET TA COMMENT ESPEICAILY ON MISSERY HOOFS
19. marts 2007 23:31
Miss Candy sagde...
Pull the reins back, Please comment on anything good-unlke kerrianne who in year 5 focused on the spelling mistakes,quite a few in there!! But please read it ihave improved heaps!!! It's great!! oh well i guess your is reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllllllly good and mine is only good bye
20. marts 2007 00:09
Kitty Kat sagde...
thanks averyone who comments on my blog remember new chapter out tommorrow...
20. marts 2007 00:25
Miss Candy sagde...
this is unrealated.....
whats ya fave kitty type:
birman,blue russian,ginger,tabby,long hair,shorthair??
ya fave type of horse:
lippizan, belgian warm blood,american dream craft,azzteca,selle francais???
What's your fave type of dooggy:
goldenreatriver,beagel,labrodor,sheep dog,bulldog,chaihaiha???
20. marts 2007 02:22
Miss Candy sagde...
Da know all these
20. marts 2007 02:23
emjay sagde...
Hey I was recommeneded to come and check out your blog here. Way to go, writing a book (?)! That's amazing. You write very well and I have been periodically checking your blog to look for any updates! Good stuff... And thanks for the advice on the whole word verification thing, much appreciated!
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