I pant, my mouth open like a dog.
I begin to run again, desperately try to find my way out of the forest.
My face is bruised and swollen, telling my story to many times.
What an idiot I've been!
I push away a tree branch and there, in front of me lies the old dust path.
I turn my eyes away from the sunlight and begin my long walk home.
I break into a run perspiration dripping of my blood-stained body.
I scream in pain, once again, falling deep, into the dirt.
I pull myself up desperately begging with no-one, the somebody I long to be with me.
I finally arrive at the city gates.
The guards ask my name but I can't say anything.
"Kid! Say your name and your through!"
"Holiya." I say weakly.
"Holiya? Is that truly you? It is me Kazalibraka! Your uncle! Everyone is looking for you!"
I walk straight on through, letting his voice drown out.
Once around the corner I start to run, desperate to get home.
Suddenly I see it, my house, my home!
"Maska!" I say, opening the door.
"Holiya?" My Maska says, her voice weak.
"Yes Maska, its me."
"Oh my baby!" She says holding me in her arms sobbing wildly.
Fear not I have not forgotten my snippet...next-last chapter.
I begin to run again, desperately try to find my way out of the forest.
My face is bruised and swollen, telling my story to many times.
What an idiot I've been!
I push away a tree branch and there, in front of me lies the old dust path.
I turn my eyes away from the sunlight and begin my long walk home.
I break into a run perspiration dripping of my blood-stained body.
I scream in pain, once again, falling deep, into the dirt.
I pull myself up desperately begging with no-one, the somebody I long to be with me.
I finally arrive at the city gates.
The guards ask my name but I can't say anything.
"Kid! Say your name and your through!"
"Holiya." I say weakly.
"Holiya? Is that truly you? It is me Kazalibraka! Your uncle! Everyone is looking for you!"
I walk straight on through, letting his voice drown out.
Once around the corner I start to run, desperate to get home.
Suddenly I see it, my house, my home!
"Maska!" I say, opening the door.
"Holiya?" My Maska says, her voice weak.
"Yes Maska, its me."
"Oh my baby!" She says holding me in her arms sobbing wildly.
Fear not I have not forgotten my snippet...next-last chapter.
7 kommentarer:
love it.
it has so much depth, excitment and imagination....
i cant think of what else to say....brilliant, fantastic, mesmorising.....
Hello why don't have a supporting picture like you usaully do?, you didn't use the same format-at least centre it. as a author you have to keep all these the same. I turn my eyes away from the sunlight and begin my long walk home. i think in this sentence there should be a comma before and.
My Maska says. My? what's a maska?
sorry this questions come up randomly and tah
Ms Candy, That has already been explained!
i disagree, miss candy - no comma required. what do others think?
great writing - bring on the last chapter...
i disagree, miss candy - no comma required. what do others think?
great writing - bring on the last chapter...
Whoops?
Yeah, my English teacher says if he catches anyone putting a comma before 'and' they should be taken outside and SHOT!
Another really good chapter, KittyKat! Ooohh... only ONE MORE! C'mon, c'mon, the suspense is KILLING ME!!!
-gweLEE
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