
As I lie down to sleep my last inch of energy drains away.
"Holiya?" I hear my other room mate Feskara.
"I scared."
I sigh.
"Feskara, how old are you?" I ask sleepily.
"I six." She says.
"Well...try thinking about some flowers...um, flowers blowing in the wind." I say, trying to sound sure of myself.
I lie looking upwards to the concrete roof until I hear Feskara's breathing steadily.
I let my aching muscles relax, and fall into a light, dreamy doze.
I awake to see Mizora standing above me.
"Hurry!!! Dress we have to get to the platform!" She says with a voice so full of panic it makes me jump out of bed and start to dress into the strange cloths that I had worn yesterday.
Mizora shakes her head and points to the end of my bed where another strange set of clothes lies.
They're the same as yesterdays only green.
I hurriedly dress as Mizora and I begin the winding journey to the platform.
We rushing to hear my name called over the loudspeaker.
As I step onto the platform I see that all the other girls are also dressed in green.
I spot Ali near the far right corner and walk over.
She hands me a metal pole and immediately began to start throwing blows at me.
Four hours and a billion bruises later I arrive back at the dorm.
As my eyes scan the room I see clothes thrown all over the floor.
The fresh flowers, placed in a vase only this morning are smashed everywhere.
Feskara sits wide eyed in the corner shivering like mad.
I step towards her but as I do the bathroom door slams shut.
In its place stands my father, my brother and Malanao.

7 kommentarer:
oh yay! another chapter, i always get excited when i see "chapter 12 etc" lying on the screen! hehe, once again it is full of mystery, enxplicablity, and i love it! yay!
you may want to rephrase this, it dosnt make sence,
"We rushing to hear my name called over the loudspeaker".
and maybe put a comma i here somewhere, "She says with a voice so full of panic it makes me jump out of bed and start to dress into the strange cloths that I had worn yesterday."
i hope that heplps!
what??? i'm confused sounds scary
Confused?
In what way!
you might want smaller spaces between the lines.
im preparing myself for more
it is kinda scary in a way...
pim:P
oh that was the computer not me!
I will try to do another chapter soon but I'm not to sure just HOW soon!
beatifull, intriging, excited, and full of suspence, kitty kat this is one great online novel!!!!!!
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